I got here from vikki's lj, since she's an amazing writer, i always check her favourite stories too. I was a bit wary of reading L/V slash, I mean, my Lukie... with his father???? The very idea seemed ludicrous. But then, there are people that actually make it plausible. I think 'An even greater sin' and your fic rise to the challenge very well. I think the line the struck me the most was as simple as 'He felt' in italics. It just 'tells' so much more than a thorough descriptive scene. Chapter three was... very elegant, which is not something that can be found easily in slash fics. So, in short, very well done.
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Date: 2006-02-09 06:49 pm (UTC)So, in short, very well done.
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