Jan. 19th, 2006

rynne: (just the shadow)
Here's chapter two of my Luke/Vader fic. The rating is changed from R/NC17 to just NC17, 'cause I finished the sex in chapter three...and it ain't R. This part's still PG, though; it's the last two chapters that are high-rated.

Title: For Thine is the Kingdom
Author: Rynne
Fandom: Star Wars
Rating: overall, NC17. This part, PG.
Summary: Vader will do anything to persuade Luke to the Dark Side...post-ESB Luke/Vader slash/incest
Warning: This is rated NC17 for father/son incestual slash, sexual acts, dubious consent, and (possible) disturbing themes. If you do not think you can handle such things maturely, please do not read.
Notes: Thank you to [livejournal.com profile] jedibix783 for betaing. Written for and dedicated to [livejournal.com profile] vikkir, who asked me for L/V slash. Hope you like it. :)

The warning and rating apply to the fic as a whole; this part, however, is rated PG and does not have any of the things I'm warning for. Those come starting next chapter.

Chapter Two )
rynne: (english vocabulary)
Here's a meme that most writers on my flist appear to have done. :p Not sure I can think of ten things that I consistently do, but eh.

You know you're reading a fic by Rynne when...

1. There are dashes all over the place. ALL OVER THE PLACE. And lots of commas and semi-colons.

2. The sentences are long and convoluted. Unless it's been betad and my beta told me to chop them up. :p

3. People think. A lot. Hopefully not boring thinking, but...lots of introspection.

4. Description all over the place, settings and emotions and the whole shebang. I love imagery.

5. If there's sex, it's vanilla, and it's between people who have an emotional connection of some sort. Most often it's love, or will develop into love. Only in the two fics I've written that have consent issues is it something other than (healthy) love.

6. Sentences often begin with conjunctions.

7. Third person omniscient? What's that? I do third limited past, some third limited present, some first past, rare first present and rare second past/present, but I can't do third omniscient at all; when I'm in someone's head, I'm in that person's head.

8. People sigh. A lot. Their eyes also widen, narrow, open, and close a lot.

Eh. Can't think of anything else, though if someone else can, you're welcome to mention it in comments.

Also, I posted two fics last night, and neither of them have any comments so far. *sigh* I realize my flist (or rather, my f-of list) is more HP than SW (and I promise, there will be more HP soon!), but it wouldn't be so depressing if at least one person commented...

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